Blog Entry #2.18 - Greeting card 2 (B,D)

the consumer targeted by this card are the elderly i feel that elderly are not really cared for in or community so thats whhy i chise them. i think this card will make them feel greatly appreciated.
i think the saying isappealing because its so simple and the picture mainly because itll wake them up.
th original sketch was bad in color and it didnt have a saying so i corrected each problem.